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The narrative is not concise,

I used to pour water into sentences and plot plots, but it almost became a flood. A ring fight wrote me four or five chapters, which became protracted and lengthy.

Clearly use concise language to write roughly two or three chapters, and the rhythm is just right to finish the ring battle, and finally it is top-heavy.

Many people behind 　　 talk about water, which is largely related to my change of writing.

So it doesn’t matter,

I’m not writing in RMB, it’s impossible to make everyone like it, and then I’ll change back to the previous concise narrative style.

will certainly improve a little bit, but I will change the overall style back to the previous one.

This style itself is actually a typesetting suitable for mobile clients. If you like it, continue to support it. If you don’t like it, I can’t help it.

that's it.

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Ps:

By the way, the book friend group has already been opened, if you are interested, you can go to the introduction page to add it,

but do not accept reminders [manual funny]